Hi,  is a complex edit, discouraged by ArchWiki:Contributing#The 3 fundamental rules. Can you give a better explanation of why you think your revision is better than the previous? -- Kynikos (talk) 16:06, 11 June 2020 (UTC)
Hi, sorry, I wasn't aware of these fundamental rules, I will read them asap. I put my explanation in the article discussion, https://wiki.archlinux.org/index.php/Talk:Dm-crypt/Encrypting_a_non-root_file_system Thanks for the hint Kynikos !